the lame
souls struggle up the ladder
the lame souls of poverty
injustice and hate.
they scrounge for food
only to get a boot in the ass
and a “I’ll see you again tomorrow.”
they try to gain respect
only to find
a doctor’s bill and a
black suited lawyer.
their ignorance only draws them
further down
to the path of repetition
again,
again, and
again.
1 comment:
I like this one, especially the end where you say they're on a path of repetition then you repeat yourself. definately a "good" image overall. the first four lines seem like they might be missing some punctuation...the flow just seems rough like the they run together. I'm not sure if that's what you were going for.
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